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Friday, August 2, 2019

Persuasive Writing 2/8/19


   



In Writing we have been doing Persuasive writing we have been doing advertisements we got to do selling a product or helping a cause . I wanted to do helping a cause so everyone can take notice of the planet and not using plastic .









5 comments:

  1. Nice work Manaia I like how your convince people to stop using plastic bags

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  2. Thank you Mckenzie i am trying to help people not use plastic .

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  3. kia ora Manaia, Thank you for telling me all of that helpful information about what we are doing to the earth by using single use plastic and glass.
    I would really like to know how people would stop using plastic because we basicly live on plastic and single use

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  4. Hi Manaia, I'm Lucia from Rawhiti school . I really like the lay out of the writing . I like how you want to make people stop using plastic. Next time you could make your writing easier to read .

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  5. hi Manaia, i love how you are telling the whole entire word to stop using plastic. next time i think you could make the writing a bit bigger that would be wonderful

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