In Writing we have been doing Persuasive writing we have been doing advertisements we got to do selling a product or helping a cause . I wanted to do helping a cause so everyone can take notice of the planet and not using plastic .
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Friday, August 2, 2019
Persuasive Writing 2/8/19
In Writing we have been doing Persuasive writing we have been doing advertisements we got to do selling a product or helping a cause . I wanted to do helping a cause so everyone can take notice of the planet and not using plastic .
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Nice work Manaia I like how your convince people to stop using plastic bags
ReplyDeleteThank you Mckenzie i am trying to help people not use plastic .
ReplyDeletekia ora Manaia, Thank you for telling me all of that helpful information about what we are doing to the earth by using single use plastic and glass.
ReplyDeleteI would really like to know how people would stop using plastic because we basicly live on plastic and single use
Hi Manaia, I'm Lucia from Rawhiti school . I really like the lay out of the writing . I like how you want to make people stop using plastic. Next time you could make your writing easier to read .
ReplyDeletehi Manaia, i love how you are telling the whole entire word to stop using plastic. next time i think you could make the writing a bit bigger that would be wonderful
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